Alyssa Cooper
23/8/2015 05:23:16
Here is my take on Margin question: What were the sources of state authority in the First Civilizations?
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Bingham
23/8/2015 09:36:19
Hi Alyssa! Good answer. I think you'll notice if you read your response again that the real "meat" is in your second sentence. All the rest is, well, dreassing.. This is all we want in a non-English class.
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Cathleen
23/8/2015 06:18:42
This question, I felt like needed maybe some clarification, because at first I thought it was asking what was the reason for state authority so the answer would be exactly what Alyssa said. But since the margin questions want us to cover the whole section of the Rise of State, I think the question extends that paragraph. (I could be way off here, so if I'm making no sense, it's because I'm not.)
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Bingham
23/8/2015 09:40:12
Bam! There you go Cathleen!
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Alyssa
23/8/2015 06:26:07
Thanks so much Cathleen! Just for clarification, I was correct but I also need to add the information that you wrote in order to completely answer the question?
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cathleen freedman
23/8/2015 06:49:26
Yes! I think (again, I could be off) the full answer for that question would be your response + mine
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Kendal LeFlore
23/8/2015 06:42:45
I am also confused what the question is asking. At first glance, it appears that the question asks what caused state authority (here, "source" means where the need for authority arose from), which is what Alyssa's comment answers. But as I look at the question, I wonder if it asks who people look to as a figure or a source of authority and where the authority itself comes from. My answer to this version of the question would be kings and pharaohs, whose power comes from the fact that their subjects view them as godly figures that dwell in lavish, almost fantastical settings.
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Bingham
23/8/2015 09:48:17
Oh my, another school year, and students are taking the path of failure that they always do. This forum has been here since May, and now people are falling into that middle school pattern of doing the work/thinking the night before. Don't get me wrong, it was courageous of you guys to post, just think of what the other 77 people in the class are doing/not doing!
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Diego Salazar
24/8/2015 12:29:28
Well, I might be a little late, but the first civilizations didn't exactly appear The day after the cereal grains flourished.
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Bingham
25/8/2015 10:48:43
Hey Diego, there are some problems with you syntax here, but this an extremely impressive answer. Guys, you should look at what Diego is trying to express, especially with regard to the association of women with nature at a time when societies were making enormous break throughs in finally taking control of nature (agriculture, irrigation, monumental architecture, etc.)
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Micah Zimmerman
25/8/2015 15:03:05
Now, I know I am really late about this too but I need any advice or improvements on a margin question,"What accounts for the initial breakthrough to civilization?"
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Bingham
26/8/2015 02:14:08
Here's my answer:
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Micah
25/8/2015 15:35:14
I have one more question I want someone to look at. " In what ways was social inequalities expressed in early civilizations?"
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Bingham
26/8/2015 02:22:36
"the best of everything" is vague, you aren't really saying anything. I think you mean it was expressed as wealth, in clothing, in their houses.
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Elle
26/8/2015 13:14:38
Hi, I have a question about one of the Big Picture Questions. I'm just wondering if I'm leaving stuff out or not, or if I even answered the question correctly.
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Bingham
27/8/2015 13:04:33
Dig for more specific evidence. Concrete details.
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